This article is the fifth
in the series: Writing a Chapter Book.
Try these tips:
Voice. If
the characters are kids, they should sound like kids. Make the dialog authentic
and age appropriate. Chapter books use lots of dialog to show character
development. One character may stutter or have a lisp. The other may talk in a
way that is easy to identify, such as ending sentences with a question. Let’s go for a walk, okay? Each
character needs to have a distinct way of talking. These identifying
markers—unique speech patterns and phrasing—make them seem real. Capture the
reader’s imagination with action verbs and specific descriptors. The squirrel
climbed up the tree is okay but The squirrel scampered is better.
Active
voice usually works better than passive voice because the reader “sees” the
action as it takes place. Example: The bicycle was ridden by the boy is
passive. In passive voice the action is performed upon the
subject. In active voice the subject performs the action, as in The boy rode
the bicycle. Sentences with active voice are more concise and use fewer words
to describe the action and express the idea.
Call for submissions for young writers:
TEEN INK, a national teen magazine, book series, and website is devoted
entirely to teenage writing, art, photos and forums. Students must be age 13-19
to participate, register and/or submit work. Distributed through classrooms by
English teachers, Creative Writing teachers, Journalism teachers and art
teachers around the country, Teen Ink magazine offers some of the most
thoughtful and creative work generated by teens and has the largest
distribution of any publication of its kind. We have no staff writers or
artists; we depend completely on submissions from teenagers nationwide for our
content. We offer teenagers the opportunity to publish their creative work and
opinions on the issues that affect their lives - everything from love and
family to teen smoking and community service.
Submission guidelines at http://www.teenink.com/About
Call for submissions for adult writers:
FrostFire Worlds is a new
quarterly science fiction and fantasy adventures print magazine for young
readers (ages 8-17) from Alban Lake Publishing. The first issue will be
released on August 1, 2013.
Submission guidelines at http://albanlake.com/guidelines-frostfire/
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Thanks for the tips, Nancy. I am really enjoying this useful series.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the tips, Nancy. I am really enjoying this useful series.
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