Learn from published authors. Find a
book you love in the genre you’re writing. The first time you read the book,
read for enjoyment, then reread to analyze why you enjoyed the book. Make
notes.
Did the first line of first
paragraph have a hook that immediately drew you in? How did word choice at the
beginning make you want to keep reading?
Did you like the structure of the
story? Was it told in a fast pace, slow and easy, or some of each? Was it told
by one character or more? Were the chapters unusually short, especially long,
or somewhere in-between? Did the sentences vary in length?
How were character traits revealed?
Did the author provide a detailed description of the character or just a trait
or two and the reader has to imagine the rest?
Is the dialog snappy? Humorous? Pay
attention to the amount of dialog vs. narrative. Is the dialog interesting?
Dialog serves two purposes: to carry the story forward and to develop the
character. Did the dialog stay true to those purposes?
How was the setting described? Did
the setting play a role in the plot?
Next week, I’ll continue with this
series.
Call
for Submissions for Adult Writers:
Another
Realm, an ezine. The stories may be science fiction,
fantasy or horror only. Our maximum word limit is 5,000 words. Submissions are
accepted year round.
Do not center titles.
We know when to set most text to italics. If you want italics for
anything other than titles or thought, indicate start and stop places as
follows: For italics, *****words you wish italicised***.
Please include your name, both real and as you wish it published.
Your address, both email and physical, so we know where to send the
check and how to contact you.
Please include a word count.
Good reminders, Nancy. Thanks.
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