Try these tips:
The main focus of the story should
not be humor; rather, it should be about character and plot. Dashes of humor
merely add kid appeal to a well-developed story. Humor is not the story.
Sometimes,
the word choice for dialog or narrative is funny. Words, such as “doohickey”
and “rumpus” are funny. Also words that start with a hard “K” or a hard “G”
sound are funny. Consider “kerfuffle” or “girdle.” Their sounds bring a
chuckle.
Never be disappointed when the
humor in your writing doesn’t come through in the first draft. Humor is
released in revision. Keep working the text until the humor emerges.
Read humorous chapter books so
you’ll get a feel for what works with this age group.
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Good reminder with "humor is not the story." I continue to enjoy this series of posts. Thanks for doing them.
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ReplyDeleteGreat. Thanks, Rosi. For me, humor usually doesn't show it's wit until I'm in the revision stage. When writing the first draft, I'm totally focused on writing the "story." Once that is complete, I approach revision a layer at a time. Humor is one layer. If I think of a humorous retort, dialog, or situation, I'll include it. If I'm not sure where the humor will work best, I'll make a note. I can include it during revision so I can find the best place in the text for it.
ReplyDeleteI probably should do a series of blogs on the process of writing, using such examples as I just mentioned.