Description is used to enhance
fictional stories. Check out the following ways:
Descriptive
scenes move the plot. Action verbs, such as dashed and darted often work better
than run because they are more specific. The more specific we are with our word
choice, the more vivid the picture we paint with words. Abstract words are
difficult to visualize and leave the reader feeling confused. Concrete,
specific words give the reader an image to grasp.
Concrete
images create three-dimensional pictures in which the reader can
experience the action, setting, event, or subject matter. Think of it as
describing a tornado touchdown. Add details that make the reader feel as if he
is actually witnessing the scene, feeling the highly charged air, hearing the
roar, seeing the destruction, and feeling the flying debris.
Mood
and tone are affected by description. A sadness charged through Jessie like a runaway train. Or Her smile, like the sun, lit up the garden.
Description
allows the writer to develop a rhythm with words that plays throughout the
story. About 90% of the story will be action and dialog and 10% description.
Call for Submissions for Adult Writers:
The Book Smugglers Publishing: We Want Your Short Stories. What
we’re looking for:
DIVERSITY.
We want to read and publish short stories that reflect the diverse world we
live in, about and from traditionally underrepresented perspectives.
Middle
Grade, Young Adult, and Adult audience submissions are welcome. Good
speculative fiction is ageless!
Creativity
& Subversion. We love subversive stories. We want you to challenge the
status quo with your characters, storytelling technique, and themes.
Submission guidelines at:
http://thebooksmugglers.com/2014/05/announcing-book-smugglers-publishing-we-want-your-short-stories.html
Thanks, Nancy. Good stuff as always.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rosi.
ReplyDeleteI'm writing a couple of chapter books and have been working on them for the last few months. What are you working on?